Writing Sophisticated Dual Narrative [Not Just Because the Market Told You To]

Because dual narratives and frame narratives are frequent tropes, especially in historical and women’s fiction, I edit a decent amount of manuscripts that use them. This can be a fantastic device if the author’s intention in using this structure is either evident on the page or is something they’ve told me they’re working toward.

If the reason is just that it’s a trope of the genre and therefore they have to do it, though? Then, Houston, we may have a problem.

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Writing Workshop: Close Reading the First Line of Bill Broun’s Night of the Animals

When it comes to passages that make you go “…whoa,” every writer knows the importance of a great opening sentence. (Name one workshop on finding your dream agent that doesn’t talk about “perfecting your hook.” I dare you.) Put simply, a great opening sentence gives you the platform and the opportunity to grab a reader’s attention and never let go.

Here’s a phenomenal example that made me go, “…whoa” recently:

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