Manuscript Critique:
Structural & Content-Level Editorial Feedback

In four weeks, you get practical action items to make your manuscript marketable, polished, & prepped for submission.

“I feel like I finally have a fighting chance at publication after everything you’ve done for me. I really can’t thank you enough. … I love getting your checklists and explanations for everything because not only do they give me such a solid direction but they also make me so inspired to go back and write.” — Taylor Borchmann, author of THE GATEKEEPERS and THE UNDERWORLD

Manuscript Critique start dates available on an individual basis.
Use the contact form below to get the ball rolling.

Negotiations begin at $0.04 per word.
Budget tier + payment plans available.

Please note: Hatch Editorial Services takes on clients at its editor’s discretion. HES is not tolerant of and reserves the right to terminate work on manuscripts including homophobic, transphobic, racist, sexist, ableist, or other prejudiced elements.

On or before deadline, you will receive:

  1. A comprehensive editorial letter, identifying and prescribing solutions for structural and content-level concerns.

  2. Your annotated manuscript, line edited to improve narrative flow, with grammar, spelling, and punctuation corrected via track changes.

Keeping you in the loop:

  1. Weekly Status Memos. Active Manuscript Critique clients receive Weekly Status Memos that update them on Jessica's progress throughout their projects and educate them on writing and publishing topics of interest to the individual client.

  2. Complimentary Follow-Up Call. Even the most thorough editorial letter can leave an author with follow-up questions. Take advantage of my complimentary call offering to address your concerns about my editorial letter, your manuscript, or the publishing process in general.

“Not only does Jessica have a keen eye for grammar details, but she easily recognizes contextual gaps. She makes fantastic suggestions to improve the pacing of the story and development of characters. She mades the editing/revising process quite enjoyable. I would highly recommend Jessica to anyone.” — Sabra Waldfogel, Author of LET ME FLY

Dear Jessica,

Thank you. Your letter is brilliant... incredible. I‘m speechless - you‘ve provided everything I hoped for, and much, much more. You found such a charming way to break the news to me of the novel’s failings. Chapeau! You‘re amazing.

Keen observations, fresh insights, practicable suggestions — these will make my revision voyage that much more structured and delightful. ... Your step-by-step method suits me perfectly. (But you knew that, right?)

As Robert Deniro famously said, “You’re good, you.”

Thank you, Jessica: you saved HERE. I. AM. and rekindled my love for it.
— Gordon Adler, author of HERE. I. AM.